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I talk to one of my tutor today. I definitely should have some of images. I should print it as fast as soon as possible now. 

I plan to create an 8 frame animation to show a rough visual image of the game.  I have never drew Animation before so i find an template of character motion on the internet to imitate. 

I have been working so slow this semester. From my point of view, on on hand, it is because my drawing skills is not qualified to some degree. On the other hand, it is because i don't understand the brief of this project enough and plan it well in the first place. I consider i don't communicate with my tutors and my classmates enough to achieve that. Feedback from another tutor: Be more careful about the consistence of the text on each page.

Feedback 1. The font size on it is too big and there should have more text on it in that case. 2. The text does not grid well. 3. There might not have enough time to do embossing texture on the cover. 4. The map page could be put just after the main character page. 5. I should pay more attention of the detail on the catalog page. 6. Pay more attention of the spelling of the context. 7. The world of the game should be explained more. By what I present now, there are many information missing in the booklet. 8.being careful about the consistency of the characters.

We were shown the previous example of the report this week. There are different ways to show my work. I am thinking about having an embossing cover.