Week 11 Feedback from my tutor
Feedback
1. The font size on it is too big and there should have more text on it in that case.
2. The text does not grid well.
3. There might not have enough time to do embossing texture on the cover.
4. The map page could be put just after the main character page.
5. I should pay more attention of the detail on the catalog page.
6. Pay more attention of the spelling of the context.
7. The world of the game should be explained more. By what I present now, there are many information missing in the booklet.
8.being careful about the consistency of the characters.
1. The font size on it is too big and there should have more text on it in that case.
2. The text does not grid well.
3. There might not have enough time to do embossing texture on the cover.
4. The map page could be put just after the main character page.
5. I should pay more attention of the detail on the catalog page.
6. Pay more attention of the spelling of the context.
7. The world of the game should be explained more. By what I present now, there are many information missing in the booklet.
8.being careful about the consistency of the characters.
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