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Feedback: The big picture on page 5 is good but the images after are too sporadic. It is better to have more image like the one on page 5 so that the booklet is more organised as a whole. There could be a hero image to show all the character at the same time.

Feedback I need more illustration. I should have at least two pictures with a relatively good quality to show the skills i have. The design of the pitch bible could be more creative. For example, the first page does not have to be an introduction page. There could be an image for the whole page. I could ask for advice from my tutor of typography after i get all the information of the booklet done, about the way of binding, it depends on what i want to present from the booklet. About the environment page, the mobile game is a 2D view game. Instead of just showing the concept of the environment, i should also think about how it is going to look on the game play.  In conclusion, from what i got above, I should refine the image further and finish the character design process as soon as possible. I can think about the typography and the text after that. *The draft of the booklet/pitch bible

Feedback: I was not working on my project with a clearly plan during the holiday. I should start drawing a storyboard of the pitch bible. It helps me to work more organised.

different color palette different pose different suit Game play concept

1.the elevator 2.character talk to a female agent. 3.capsule dropping to the earth 4 the earth ......

Some pictures to show the concept of the story. He is sent to the earth portrait of the character The concept of the elevator The healthy earth The earth being polluted (red tide/ocean water turn red because algae bloom) Robots Robots will be obstructions on his way to achieve the mission wearing and equipments